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Title: Buchsbaum website
Post by: diodak on October 13, 2010, 08:16:11 PM

Hi, finally I`ve moved my website to Website Baker :)

It`s about my family buxus farm and it`s in german, if you see any mistakes in german translation please let me know, thanks.

Buchsbaum (http://buchsbaumhof.com)

Title: Re: Buchsbaum website
Post by: instantflorian on October 13, 2010, 10:23:37 PM

Hi,
nice page. But very green... maybe a gradient background from green to white would look better?

I don't know if the Buchsbaum is really known under the name "Buchs" (but I'm not a gardener at all).

On "Buchsbaum pflanzen" I found some small mistakes:
- Headline: So pflanzen Sie eine Hecke an with a small p (it's a verb)
- 1st paragraph: word order: "Sie können aber auch Ihren Buchs dichter pflanzen
- 2nd paragraph: "ein- bis zweimal im Jahr"
- Im sure you should replace the "(link do Buchsbaum schneiden)" with a real link to the page  :-D

And on Buchsbaum im Kübel:
-- change "umzuwickeln" to "zu umwickeln"
-- Numeration #1: change "am Hitzetag" to "an heißen Tagen", "nicht frostigen Tagen" to "frostfreien Tagen"
-- Numeration #3: change whole text to "
Soll ich im Winter meinen Buchsbaum auf der Terrasse lassen oder lieber in der Wohnung aufbewahren?
Der Buchsbaum ist eine Giftpflanze und hat einen leicht unangenehmen Geruch, daher eignet er sich nicht als Wohnungspflanze. Sie können ihn auf der Terasse aufbewahren. Denken Sie daran, ihn an frostfreien Tagen regelmäßig zu gießen."
-- Numeration #4: change "soll" to "sollte"

I would divide the Kontakt and Impressum part, that would look more friendly. You could also build a contact form where customers directly can ask questions or order some Buchsbäume. (Btw: ever thought of a Buchsbaum online shop? It's quite easy to build one with bakery...)

Regards
-instantflorian.

Title: Re: Buchsbaum website
Post by: diodak on October 13, 2010, 11:04:07 PM

Hi, thanks for your post, this help is priceless.

As I see name for Buchsbaum/Buchs depends on region of Germany http://www.google.com/insights/search/#q=buchs%2Cbuchsbaum%2C&geo=DE&cmpt=q

I`m thinking about shop but need some time to implement and test how it works.

Thanks, Grzegorz