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vyni:
If I do understand correctly,
You want write about designing a page, hosting and so on - I have no idea about Your language.
In the portfolio You show some pages - so I guess.

I mean with this green on a white site and white text this is no go, absolutly no go.
And if You want someone to ask You for creating, recreating or whatever - You must provide something eye-catching. He must see, love and want to have.

Me, personally, wouldn´t try to read what You are writing, because I´m flashed in the very first 0,002 seconds when I look at this color-combination and cannot fast enough switch back.

Sorry - You asked what I think.

I like green/white or green/yellow a lot. Really I do - my "almost own" page is green/yellow.
But this yellowgreen background and small white text, surrounded by a big white area - never.

Try setting the green to the grass-green, same than the picture, but the darker part. Than the white text will be better seen, and break the bright white background, set it to slightly grey or deep black, so Your eyes are leaded to the beautiful colored part of the screen.

And this lost peace of login-box? a minimum could be to frame it - so it appears as card, box or however You want to call it. Right now it looks like missing everything.

regards from Himberg

tessed:
Ok, as i wasn't hundred percent convinced about the white font color and your honest opinion as a visitor i decided to change the color to something darker.

The border around the login form is something for later.

Regards,

Tyronne

vyni:


 :-D Is much better now.

But still the login, and there annother thing: The link "Forgot Details" set it in a new line, so it doesn´t break.

regards

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